I love these poems! You have worked so hard to put all your learning into your writing, and it has worked wonderfully well!
“The tall trees looked villainous” is brilliant, and so is “damp eerie mist thickened”. I can really picture the place you are talking about, but I think I don’t really want to go there as you have made it sound like a very dark, unwelcoming place!
Keep up with the amazing writing – I can’t wait to read some more!
I love these poems! You have worked so hard to put all your learning into your writing, and it has worked wonderfully well!
“The tall trees looked villainous” is brilliant, and so is “damp eerie mist thickened”. I can really picture the place you are talking about, but I think I don’t really want to go there as you have made it sound like a very dark, unwelcoming place!
Keep up with the amazing writing – I can’t wait to read some more!