Jasmin, I love the way you started this story with an exclamation. I just had to read on. You’ve used a great balance of shot and long sentences and your story is very engaging. Well done.
Jasmin says, “Thank you for the positive feedback. Your comments are very useful.”
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Jasmin, I love the way you started this story with an exclamation. I just had to read on. You’ve used a great balance of shot and long sentences and your story is very engaging. Well done.
Jasmin says, “Thank you for the positive feedback. Your comments are very useful.”