Well done writing a response to the prompt, it was quite a difficult one this week. It certainly has been a horrific event for the people of the Philippines. I like that you have presented a message of hope for the recovery of the people and their future.
Your first sentence sets the scene for your reader, it is important that it is accurate and draws the reader in. “Dear” and “to” aren’t usually used together, it would be more accurate to say “Dear the people of the Philippines” or “To the people of the Philippines”.
Philippines is a difficult name to spell, but as it is the topic of the prompt it is important to double check it is correct.
Well done writing a response to the prompt, it was quite a difficult one this week. It certainly has been a horrific event for the people of the Philippines. I like that you have presented a message of hope for the recovery of the people and their future.
Your first sentence sets the scene for your reader, it is important that it is accurate and draws the reader in. “Dear” and “to” aren’t usually used together, it would be more accurate to say “Dear the people of the Philippines” or “To the people of the Philippines”.
Philippines is a difficult name to spell, but as it is the topic of the prompt it is important to double check it is correct.