Hi Muhammad, you have used some great vocabulary in your letter (tragic, heartbroken, conscience-stricken) – well done. Always read back through your writing to check for punctuation errors – especially when typing (capital N in the middle of a sentence). Also, try to leave a space after putting a full stop in!
Miss Willing
Team 100WC
Huntingdon, England
Hi Muhammad, you have used some great vocabulary in your letter (tragic, heartbroken, conscience-stricken) – well done. Always read back through your writing to check for punctuation errors – especially when typing (capital N in the middle of a sentence). Also, try to leave a space after putting a full stop in!
Miss Willing
Team 100WC
Huntingdon, England