water everywhere By Sumaiyah Khan

2 Responses to water everywhere By Sumaiyah Khan

1. Mrs Skinner (Team 100) Bristol, UK says:

   February 10, 2014 at 7:35 am

   Excellent writing Sumaiyah. You really created a terrible scene for your readers to engage with. Very well done!
2. Mrs Garratt says:

   February 10, 2014 at 10:04 am

   I really like how you have you used the different senses in your description.

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