Well done Maryam!! Just remember capital letters for I.
Aww! That must have been upsetting! Great effort! (grammar and punctuation mistakes were made, but it’s still great)
Well done Maryam! 🙂 I like how you explained how you were feeling.
Well done! Your story was very upsetting. You missed out on that perfect day!
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Well done Maryam!! Just remember capital letters for I.
Aww! That must have been upsetting! Great effort! (grammar and punctuation mistakes were made, but it’s still great)
Well done Maryam! 🙂 I like how you explained how you were feeling.
Well done! Your story was very upsetting. You missed out on that perfect day!