Great volcabulary, Huzaifah! But I think you could have used “but all he could see was water” in a different way. (The way you used it doesn’t make sense.)
WOW! Epic story. I feel like I’m in the story. Exellent. 🙂
Great work Huzaifah! I think your piece of work is fantastic and you have really hooked the reader in. Great vocabulary. Keep it up!
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Great volcabulary, Huzaifah! But I think you could have used “but all he could see was water” in a different way. (The way you used it doesn’t make sense.)
WOW! Epic story. I feel like I’m in the story. Exellent.
🙂
Great work Huzaifah! I think your piece of work is fantastic and you have really hooked the reader in. Great vocabulary. Keep it up!