Raheema’s Personification Poetry

Posted on October 25, 2012 by Mrs Boydon
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9 Responses to Raheema’s Personification Poetry

  1. nmakh20 says:
    October 31, 2012 at 11:42 am

    Raheema I really liked yours and it was really sad. Well Done:)

  2. mumar25 says:
    October 31, 2012 at 11:42 am

    What a poem Raheema! I really love the way you have used personification in your poem is brilliant! Keep it up!

  3. Nusaybah says:
    October 31, 2012 at 11:47 am

    Raheema, I think your poetry is really good and it is actually as if the shoe is a real person. 🙂

  4. jmistry71 says:
    November 2, 2012 at 4:36 pm

    Amazing!!!!! It was so good. I wanted to know more because it was really exciting. Well done!

  5. sahmed466 says:
    November 10, 2012 at 7:26 pm

    I really like your poem, Raheema. It had amazing description and had a great ending. Well Done! 🙂

  6. mahmad77 says:
    January 25, 2013 at 9:23 pm

    Very good! Keep up the good work. What you also could have done was challenge yourself to make it rhyme!

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