WOW, Aamir, this is a scary story! I like the way you formatted the text. The colors add to the reading experience.
Keep up the great work!
Kind regards,
Diethild
Great story, Aamir! I love how you have left it with an open ending, which leaves the reader wanting to know more. You also used some great descriptions. Well done 🙂
Yes!! I AGREE! Aamir your story is really good and again it actually shows that the story is scary because of the color of your text and the way it has been set out WOOWW! Keep up the goo work 🙂
I like the way you shared your thoughts of fear and anxiety with a question and your use of one word sentences is particularly effective. You have created quite a powerful ending by using the challenge prompt in your final sentence and leaving your readers hanging and wondering what might happen next.
Thank you for sharing your lovely writing and ideas with the 100Wc and I look forward to reading some more of your work.
What a great post Amir. I like your use of short sentences for impact. It did all help to create a really scary piece. Congratulations on making the showcase – well deserved. Keep up the fantastic work.
Mrs Prior – Team 100WC
Good 100 word challenge work! Keep it up.
WOW! Good 100 word story. I liked the bit were you wrote CREAK in capital letters. Well done!
WOW, Aamir, this is a scary story! I like the way you formatted the text. The colors add to the reading experience.
Keep up the great work!
Kind regards,
Diethild
Great story, Aamir! I love how you have left it with an open ending, which leaves the reader wanting to know more. You also used some great descriptions. Well done 🙂
Laura Team 100WC
Yes!! I AGREE! Aamir your story is really good and again it actually shows that the story is scary because of the color of your text and the way it has been set out WOOWW! Keep up the goo work 🙂
Nusaybah, it is meant to be good work 🙂
Congratulations Aamir. You’re one of the top six. I think your blog was fantastic and I am glad you won. Well Done. Keep up the good work.
Hello Aamir,
Wow, your story had me on the edge of my seat!
I like the way you shared your thoughts of fear and anxiety with a question and your use of one word sentences is particularly effective. You have created quite a powerful ending by using the challenge prompt in your final sentence and leaving your readers hanging and wondering what might happen next.
Thank you for sharing your lovely writing and ideas with the 100Wc and I look forward to reading some more of your work.
Mrs Shaw (Team 100WC)
What a great post Amir. I like your use of short sentences for impact. It did all help to create a really scary piece. Congratulations on making the showcase – well deserved. Keep up the fantastic work.
Mrs Prior – Team 100WC
WOW! Aamir, I really liked yours – it made me feel scared.
Congratulations on being selected for the 100WC Week 7 Showcase, Aamir! 🙂
@RossMannell (Team 100WC)
Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia
Thank you for all the comments that you have sent me. I really appreciate that.
A very good piece of writing. Also it was really scary and congratulations for the 100wc.
That was a superb piece of work!
I liked the way you varied your sentences between short and long. It made me very scared.