Hello Humayrah. Well done for completing your 100 Word Challenge! You have a fantastic imagination, I really enjoyed reading your story. I particularly liked the use of descriptive words you have used, for example ‘hard and white’ and ‘it felt like I was turning into ice’. This use of language created a clear image in my head of what was happening in the story. Keep up the brilliant work Humayrah, well done :-).
Humayrah your story is Great ! Keep up the good work! Well done 🙂
Hello Humayrah. Well done for completing your 100 Word Challenge! You have a fantastic imagination, I really enjoyed reading your story. I particularly liked the use of descriptive words you have used, for example ‘hard and white’ and ‘it felt like I was turning into ice’. This use of language created a clear image in my head of what was happening in the story. Keep up the brilliant work Humayrah, well done :-).
I agree Humayrah, you really did a great job of that writinng.
I agree! Humayrah, you did really well.
Well done 🙂