Maria

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12 Responses to Maria

  1. hdawood21 says:

    I love it Maria. Good use of simile 🙂

  2. Mrs Radd says:

    Hi Maria!

    This is a very unusual response to this prompt. You have got a great imagination! Do you and your Grandparents enjoy having adventures? I really wondered how you had ended up at the top of the tallest tree in the world too!

    Next time make sure that you don’t get off and of muddled up, it’s an easy mistake to make.

    Keep writing 🙂

    Mrs Radd (Team 100WC)

  3. Nusaybah says:

    Love it Maria! Great use of simile! How did you get up to the tallest tree? 🙂 Keep it up!

    • Maria says:

      Well you see Nusaybah, I started with direct speech. I got captured by a big bird and landed in the tallest tree in the world. Thank you for commenting on my work.

  4. Livvy says:

    I liked what you’ve done it is very interesting.

  5. zpatel85 says:

    I agree too. It is an interesting piece of work.

  6. mahmad77 says:

    Very brilliant piece of work, but you need to remember your spaces inbetween words.

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