This is a very unusual response to this prompt. You have got a great imagination! Do you and your Grandparents enjoy having adventures? I really wondered how you had ended up at the top of the tallest tree in the world too!
Next time make sure that you don’t get off and of muddled up, it’s an easy mistake to make.
Well you see Nusaybah, I started with direct speech. I got captured by a big bird and landed in the tallest tree in the world. Thank you for commenting on my work.
I love it Maria. Good use of simile 🙂
Thank you Humayrah. I also loved your piece of work. It was a work of beauty.
Hi Maria!
This is a very unusual response to this prompt. You have got a great imagination! Do you and your Grandparents enjoy having adventures? I really wondered how you had ended up at the top of the tallest tree in the world too!
Next time make sure that you don’t get off and of muddled up, it’s an easy mistake to make.
Keep writing 🙂
Mrs Radd (Team 100WC)
Thank you Mrs Radd for the lovely comment that you made.
Love it Maria! Great use of simile! How did you get up to the tallest tree? 🙂 Keep it up!
Well you see Nusaybah, I started with direct speech. I got captured by a big bird and landed in the tallest tree in the world. Thank you for commenting on my work.
I liked what you’ve done it is very interesting.
Thank you everyone!
I agree too. It is an interesting piece of work.
Thank you for commenting on my work!
Very brilliant piece of work, but you need to remember your spaces inbetween words.
Thank you for commenting and I will make sure I remember the spaces.