I agree that grandparents are of course important, but Duaa please try to refrain from using the word obviously twice in two sentences as it makes your work look rushed, and also you really need to add a few commas in your paragraph because without these your work sounds like one large sentence and does not make sense. I am being quite frank with you, your work is of satisfactory standard but does not make sense due to the grammatical errors. I am sure many other classmates will agree. Overall an interesting piece of work.
I loved your poster about grandparents. Yes, they are special.
You are so right about that.
Too right.
I agree that grandparents are of course important, but Duaa please try to refrain from using the word obviously twice in two sentences as it makes your work look rushed, and also you really need to add a few commas in your paragraph because without these your work sounds like one large sentence and does not make sense. I am being quite frank with you, your work is of satisfactory standard but does not make sense due to the grammatical errors. I am sure many other classmates will agree. Overall an interesting piece of work.