I really like your paragraph because it is a great description of what you did when you were young. It is different to all the other’s because you wrote a description on what and how you became attracted to your grandparents. Did you like visiting your grandparents? Well done!
Why did you have to do a one hundred word challenge?
I really love your poem its very wonderful. Did it take a long time doing these poems?
I thought you did very wonderful poem.
from kira
Hello
I really like your story. In some ways its sad that your parents left you at home when they went to Paris, but you were six months old.
I really like your paragraph because it is a great description of what you did when you were young. It is different to all the other’s because you wrote a description on what and how you became attracted to your grandparents. Did you like visiting your grandparents? Well done!
Hello I’m Valeria, I love the idea. They are all very good and I love that you all used 100 words so very well done.
p.s there terrific. Why did you do it about grandparants?
Brilliant reason why grandparents are important.
Why did you have to do a one hundred word challenge?
I really love your poem its very wonderful. Did it take a long time doing these poems?
I thought you did very wonderful poem.
from kira
Hey Aisha,
I love reading this story
I read it over and over again! Keep up the good work! 🙂 🙂
I loved reading your story Ayesha. I hope to be reading other fabulous stories from you. Well done!