A good try, Aadil. I can see that you have tried hard to include adjectives to make your writing more interesting. Carry on working on keeping your writing in the same tense. I look forward to reading your next piece of writing.
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A good try, Aadil. I can see that you have tried hard to include adjectives to make your writing more interesting. Carry on working on keeping your writing in the same tense. I look forward to reading your next piece of writing.