It was a great day! We had lots of fun in our group. I really loved looking at the leaves and the different colours in Evington Park. It was great fun. I really liked it in the libary when we listened to Miss Blasdale read the story of the Gruffalo!: )
Short, snappy and brief. I like it! It gets straight to the point, although adding a bit of length would not hurt
and only improve your grade, take my advice next time Jasmin!
It was a great day! We had lots of fun in our group. I really loved looking at the leaves and the different colours in Evington Park. It was great fun. I really liked it in the libary when we listened to Miss Blasdale read the story of the Gruffalo!: )
Wow Jasmin! You sure do know how to write summaries.
Short, snappy and brief. I like it! It gets straight to the point, although adding a bit of length would not hurt
and only improve your grade, take my advice next time Jasmin!
Thanks guys
I love it .