WOW! Its great but I think you could add more long sentences.
WOW! I love the vocabulary you have used! KEEP IT UP!! 🙂 I like the idea of short sentences . I think you could have added few more longer sentences!
That was a great piece of writing I bet you enjoyed writing it!!
WOW!!! That was amazing. I really want to know what happens next. You used some great time connectives.
Sumayah you are great at writing! I am commenting this on my new tablet which I received today!
Sumayah that was a good piece of writing! KEEP IT UP!:)
Great piece of writing – you should be really proud of what you have done!! Keep this up!
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WOW! Its great but I think you could add more long sentences.
WOW! I love the vocabulary you have used! KEEP IT UP!! 🙂 I like the idea of short sentences . I think you could have added few more longer sentences!
That was a great piece of writing I bet you enjoyed writing it!!
WOW!!! That was amazing. I really want to know what happens next. You used some great time connectives.
Sumayah you are great at writing! I am commenting this on my new tablet which I received today!
Sumayah that was a good piece of writing! KEEP IT UP!:)
Great piece of writing – you should be really proud of what you have done!! Keep this up!