Fantastic writing Year 6 – and very impressive that you are hitting those targets!
I think the subject matter is really important too. I’m really glad you’re using your writing skills for such an important campaign – your writing can change the world!
I also spotted a couple of cheeky subjunctives! “If I were you …” and “If I were the Head Teacher …”
Keep up the great work Year 6 and feel very proud of your achievements. You rock!
Fantastic writing Year 6 – and very impressive that you are hitting those targets!
I think the subject matter is really important too. I’m really glad you’re using your writing skills for such an important campaign – your writing can change the world!
I also spotted a couple of cheeky subjunctives! “If I were you …” and “If I were the Head Teacher …”
Keep up the great work Year 6 and feel very proud of your achievements. You rock!