Wow! What an excellent piece of writing. I don’t think there is anything you can improve on.
Wow Humayrah I really like your story and I like the way that you made it all happen in a dream.
Wow Humayrah! That was a great story and I like the way you ended it with It was all a dream. You could have added abit more detail. Keep it up!
Well Done Humayrah!!! I love the way it was all a dream. Next time try and be careful about your spaces and spelling. Keep up the good work=)
What a great piece of work Humayrah! I like the way you have finished it off. Well done!
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Wow! What an excellent piece of writing. I don’t think there is anything you can improve on.
Wow Humayrah I really like your story and I like the way that you made it all happen in a dream.
Wow Humayrah! That was a great story and I like the way you ended it with It was all a dream. You could have added abit more detail. Keep it up!
Well Done Humayrah!!! I love the way it was all a dream. Next time try and be careful about your spaces and spelling. Keep up the good work=)
What a great piece of work Humayrah! I like the way you have finished it off. Well done!