jasmins 100 word challenge

Posted on April 23, 2013 by jhayre25
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3 Responses to jasmins 100 word challenge

  1. nmakh20 says:
    May 4, 2013 at 6:56 pm

    Really good .

  2. momarji23 says:
    May 8, 2013 at 1:29 pm

    I really like it and I want to read it again.

  3. Anisah says:
    May 12, 2013 at 11:33 am

    Well Done Jasmin!!! I like the word horrifying at the end. At the begining you used “so” twice. Maybe next time you could ue another connective. =)

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