Hi Bilal, I really like the way you have used speech at the beginning of the writing. I hope you carry on writing like this and do well in your SATS. Well done
That’s really good Bilal, I like the bit where his dream came true. 🙂
WELL DONE!!! Bilal that was really good. I like the bit when the alien comes and sits next to you. Keep up the good work.
Good work Bilal. Well done!
Great story Bilal. What happens to Bob?
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Hi Bilal,
I really like the way you have used speech at the beginning of the writing. I hope you carry on writing like this and do well in your SATS. Well done
That’s really good Bilal, I like the bit where his dream came true. 🙂
WELL DONE!!! Bilal that was really good. I like the bit when the alien comes and sits next to you. Keep up the good work.
Good work Bilal. Well done!
Great story Bilal. What happens to Bob?