Great. I love your use of words and I could picture the whole poem. You have used great abstract nouns. Keep it up! I don’t think you need to improve on anything.
A brilliant piece of writing Maryam. You used fantastic vocabulary. Next time check your spelling because you spelt secret wrong. Other than that, it was a good poem. Keep it up!
WOW!! Maryam, I love the way you said about the witch. It makes me feel that she is actually there. That is definetely a poem to read again. Keep up the good work.
Thank you for posting this Maryam – it’s beautiful! Such wonderful word choices and vivid images. Well done.
Okay =) .
I agree with Mrs Boydon.
Your powerful word choices have encouraged me, as the reader, to really see these images in my mind’s eye!
Well done!
Great. I love your use of words and I could picture the whole poem. You have used great abstract nouns. Keep it up! I don’t think you need to improve on anything.
Thanks:)
Great poem Maryam , keep up the good work!
Wow Maryam. This is such an amazing poem. I don’t think you need to improve anything:)
I like the bit about an ogre guarding an ancient bridge to heaven it was really imaganitive. Well done:)
A brilliant piece of writing Maryam. You used fantastic vocabulary. Next time check your spelling because you spelt secret wrong. Other than that, it was a good poem. Keep it up!
Very good piece of wirting. I liked the way you described the box.
WOW!! Maryam, I love the way you said about the witch. It makes me feel that she is actually there. That is definetely a poem to read again. Keep up the good work.
I love the way you have written your poem. Well done!