The Magic Box…

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12 Responses to The Magic Box…

  1. Mrs Boydon says:

    Thank you for posting this Maryam – it’s beautiful! Such wonderful word choices and vivid images. Well done.

  2. aravat26 says:

    Okay =) .

  3. Mrs Waldrum says:

    I agree with Mrs Boydon.

    Your powerful word choices have encouraged me, as the reader, to really see these images in my mind’s eye!

    Well done!

  4. Nusaybah says:

    Great. I love your use of words and I could picture the whole poem. You have used great abstract nouns. Keep it up! I don’t think you need to improve on anything.

  5. msimat20 says:

    Thanks:)

  6. zpatel87 says:

    Great poem Maryam , keep up the good work!

  7. amohammedpate20 says:

    Wow Maryam. This is such an amazing poem. I don’t think you need to improve anything:)

  8. jmistry71 says:

    I like the bit about an ogre guarding an ancient bridge to heaven it was really imaganitive. Well done:)

  9. bsahota21 says:

    A brilliant piece of writing Maryam. You used fantastic vocabulary. Next time check your spelling because you spelt secret wrong. Other than that, it was a good poem. Keep it up!

  10. fmohammad23 says:

    Very good piece of wirting. I liked the way you described the box.

  11. ahussain255 says:

    WOW!! Maryam, I love the way you said about the witch. It makes me feel that she is actually there. That is definetely a poem to read again. Keep up the good work.

  12. Maria says:

    I love the way you have written your poem. Well done!

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