Hi Sarah! This is a nice family story but I think it could have been even better if you had concentrated a bit more on the water. I know your talent for humour would have shone through. I enjoyed reading your work- thank you for sharing!
Great, Sarah! But I have to agree with Mrs Skinner, this could be better. It’s still fab though!
Good start and I like how it was all a dream.
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Hi Sarah!
This is a nice family story but I think it could have been even better if you had concentrated a bit more on the water. I know your talent for humour would have shone through. I enjoyed reading your work- thank you for sharing!
Great, Sarah! But I have to agree with Mrs Skinner, this could be better. It’s still fab though!
Good start and I like how it was all a dream.