You wrote a very clear piece of narrative, with good use of adverbs to emphasise the action. Your chosen theme was interesting too. You let the reader know there was at least one survivor, that’s a relief!
Well done. I enjoyed reading your work!
Your style is really authentic. The short, clear sentences make the reader want to read on eagerly. It’s good to know that there is a survivor, and that they can contact someone who can help.
You wrote a very clear piece of narrative, with good use of adverbs to emphasise the action. Your chosen theme was interesting too. You let the reader know there was at least one survivor, that’s a relief!
Well done. I enjoyed reading your work!
Your style is really authentic. The short, clear sentences make the reader want to read on eagerly. It’s good to know that there is a survivor, and that they can contact someone who can help.