umar short

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5 Responses to umar short

  1. Anisah says:

    WOW. That really caught my attention. I think you have used your adjectives really well. I liked it when you said ‘my spine tingled and my skin prickled.’ Well Done. You should feel proud.

  2. udebar21 says:

    Woooaah!!! How did you write that? It is so good.

  3. bali44 says:

    WELL DONE! A great 100 word story. I liked the bit where you wrote, “my body was numb with fear” . You should be proud.

  4. nbobat21 says:

    WOOWW! I like how you wrote I felt a surge of energy! Well Done! You should be proud of yourself! 🙂 Keep it up!!

  5. Maria says:

    What a story! You used good adjectives and it really catches the readers attention. Well done!

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