Great piece of writing, Abdulhaadi!
You build up the tension really well with lots of excellent description and the use of short sentences. Maybe you could mix up the long and short a bit but, other than that, it’s a really atmospheric bit of work.
Well done – keep up the writing!
Great piece of writing, Abdulhaadi!
You build up the tension really well with lots of excellent description and the use of short sentences. Maybe you could mix up the long and short a bit but, other than that, it’s a really atmospheric bit of work.
Well done – keep up the writing!
Wow, what a scary little story! How creepy!
I love how you used some great vocabulary!
Keep up the good work!