Zainab, what can I say? Watch out, Mr Morpurgo! You used all of the tools we discussed to bring your writing to life. That relative clause really brings your character’s feelings to life.
You have begun to create that ‘mood’ we talked about by showing thoughts and feelings through actions and description. Well done Zainab!
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Zainab, what can I say? Watch out, Mr Morpurgo! You used all of the tools we discussed to bring your writing to life. That relative clause really brings your character’s feelings to life.
You have begun to create that ‘mood’ we talked about by showing thoughts and feelings through actions and description. Well done Zainab!