Well done! You have kept me interested and I want to read on, be proud!
Great use of technical vocabulary in your introduction! This really showcases your fantastic writing skills – a fantastic variety of sentence starters and I loved “tears choked at my throat”! Very well done.
You have really made an improvement on your writing! These are very good sentences.
Zainab, that was an amazing intro. I want to read on!
Fantastic work! Well done.
Great work. I have never seen a brilliant story like that. I LOVE IT
That was fab I loved it it’s exiting very powerful and u have improved because I know keep up the good wor
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Well done! You have kept me interested and I want to read on, be proud!
Great use of technical vocabulary in your introduction! This really showcases your fantastic writing skills – a fantastic variety of sentence starters and I loved “tears choked at my throat”!
Very well done.
You have really made an improvement on your writing! These are very good sentences.
Zainab, that was an amazing intro. I want to read on!
Fantastic work! Well done.
Great work. I have never seen a brilliant story like that. I LOVE IT
That was fab I loved it it’s exiting very powerful and u have improved because I know keep up the good wor