Brilliant improvements Umar! I really want to read on!
Lovely writing with some fantastic sentence starters. You’ve worked so hard on this – you should feel very proud.
It’s a good piece of writing – excellent!
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Brilliant improvements Umar! I really want to read on!
Lovely writing with some fantastic sentence starters. You’ve worked so hard on this – you should feel very proud.
It’s a good piece of writing – excellent!