Leaving London

Posted on October 31, 2014 by Mrs Willday
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2 Responses to Leaving London

  1. Ms Willday says:
    October 31, 2014 at 2:34 pm

    Your best writing yet, Umar. Really carefully done, making each sentence better and better. Words like ‘tearfully’ and ‘jolt’ will really keep the reader interested!

  2. Mrs Pilgrim says:
    November 2, 2014 at 4:57 pm

    Yes, Umar I really felt that jolt as you woke up to face the uncertainty of evacuation. Great writing.

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