zeba 100 wrd challenge

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8 Responses to zeba 100 wrd challenge

  1. Mrs Boydon says:

    I love the idea of all the tools in the shed jumping around! You’ve got a cracking imagination there, Zeba! Just watch your sentence starters – you’ve got lots of sentences starting with “I”.
    Keep up with the great writing!

  2. zeba says:

    I will make sure next time.

  3. Maria says:

    I love your 100 word challenge! It’s funny how the tools jumped out. I think this might need publishing as a real book swell. I think you have put a lot of effort in this. Well done!

  4. nbobat21 says:

    You have really thought of your sentences Zeba. I love the way they are all jumping around that made me laugh! KEEP IT UP!

  5. Anisah says:

    Well Done. I like the way you have written it in first person. Fantastic work.

  6. Mr Foster (Team 100WC) says:

    Dear Zeba,

    I really enjoyed your 100WC as it was very imaginative and a different way of writing about a piano.

    I agree with your teacher in that you should use different sentence starters.

    Well done.

    Mr Foster – Shrewsbury International School Bangkok

    http://blogs.shrewsbury.ac.th/year4blog

  7. zpatel85 says:

    I will be really extra careful with my sentence starters next time. Thank you for commenting.

  8. zeba says:

    THANKS FOR ALL THE COMMENTS!

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