Not quite 100 words! Im not sure if this is suppose to be a story as it sounds more like a short paragraph or an experience that you have made up or even suffered, although it would be hilarious if this actually did happen. (I have dark humor!)
That sounds really scary – I love the image of being trapped by the piano notes. It’s an exciting read and I really want to find out what happened next. You could try and add a few more adjectives and adverbs (describing words) next time to help create the pictures in the reader’s head. Keep up the great writing! 🙂
Not quite 100 words! Im not sure if this is suppose to be a story as it sounds more like a short paragraph or an experience that you have made up or even suffered, although it would be hilarious if this actually did happen. (I have dark humor!)
That sounds really scary – I love the image of being trapped by the piano notes. It’s an exciting read and I really want to find out what happened next. You could try and add a few more adjectives and adverbs (describing words) next time to help create the pictures in the reader’s head. Keep up the great writing! 🙂
Wow Jasmin, I loved that!
What happened after you fainted?
WOW! Jasmin that was amazing and scary.