OH WOW! Aisha I found that really scary how the notes played by itself. You really expressed and thought about the feelings you put in the story. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
Scary!Calm!Scary! That is how the order of your text went because you said in a haunted house then you said it is the melody your grandmother played then you said it was playing all by itself. That is a great new style you have created. I felt I was reading a real authors work. Welldone!
OH WOW! Aisha I found that really scary how the notes played by itself. You really expressed and thought about the feelings you put in the story. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
Thankyou
WOW!!! I think that was really good. I could imagine me being there. Well Done Ayesha. Keep up the good work.
WOW! That story was amazing.
What an amazing story! That really grabbed my attention. You used fabulous vocabulary and a good variety of words. WEll DONE!
Very scary, I felt like I was there.
Scary!Calm!Scary! That is how the order of your text went because you said in a haunted house then you said it is the melody your grandmother played then you said it was playing all by itself. That is a great new style you have created. I felt I was reading a real authors work. Welldone!
I got so scared ahhhh 🙁