That’s really good and something different.
Thank You.
I could not believe my eyes! I did not know I was actually reading that. I nearly started crying! LOL! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
OMG! I can not believe you actually wrote that. It was fabulous. Next time try to use different starters for your sentences because nearly all of you sentences started with ‘ I ‘. Other than that … WOW!
Amazing, but when you say ‘frown smile’ you need a comma.
OMG! That was amazing Anisah.
i thought this was a real story i was going to cry you did a wondreful job on this Good job!!!!
I thought that was amazing.Some of the words in this powergrath wee fantastic.Maybe next time you can put some punchation in your writting.
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I agree with sajida this is something different to the rest of the class, which is good. I think you have used a lot of I. Other than that KEEP IT UP!
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That’s really good and something different.
Thank You.
I could not believe my eyes! I did not know I was actually reading that. I nearly started crying! LOL! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
OMG! I can not believe you actually wrote that. It was fabulous. Next time try to use different starters for your sentences because nearly all of you sentences started with ‘ I ‘. Other than that … WOW!
Amazing, but when you say ‘frown smile’ you need a comma.
OMG! That was amazing Anisah.
i thought this was a real story i was going to cry you did a wondreful job on this Good job!!!!
I thought that was amazing.Some of the words in this powergrath wee fantastic.Maybe next time you can put some punchation in your writting.
PLEASE VISIT MY BLOG
We will visit your blog.
I agree with sajida this is something different to the rest of the class, which is good. I think you have used a lot of I. Other than that KEEP IT UP!