OMG! That is a fabulous story. You created a lot of suspense to grab the readers attention. I have spotted a couple of mistakes. Next time check your work twice so there are no mistakes. Other than that, It shall get published into a real book!
This is a fabulous piece of work. I like how you created a lot of suspense and then you said it was a beautiful sound. It was a interesting piece of work to read.
That was AMAZING! Humayrah I really enjoyed that! KEEP IT UP!
OMG! That is a fabulous story. You created a lot of suspense to grab the readers attention. I have spotted a couple of mistakes. Next time check your work twice so there are no mistakes. Other than that, It shall get published into a real book!
I really like your 100 word challenge.
It made me scared 🙂
Hi Neha. Thanks for comment.:)
Be proud – that is amazing!
Amazing!
wow! you did a good job for your 100 word challenge!
good job
Wow i like this story great job!!!!!.
This is a fabulous piece of work. I like how you created a lot of suspense and then you said it was a beautiful sound. It was a interesting piece of work to read.