COOL! 🙂
I really want to read on. Well done! It really grabs the readers attention with your fabulous vocabulary. Keep up the good work.
WOW!!! That was brilliant. Some great description. Keep up the good work.
Thanks
That’s really nice work Bilal. But you have made a few silly mistakes. 🙂
That’s a really good peice of work Bilal.
WOW! There is some really good description in that piece of writing. Keep up the good work.
I think that will make me have nightmares.
WOW, I want to know what happens next.
Wow Bilal! You did a really good job! I really want to here what happens next in your story!
bilal This is a great story.
this story is scarys and really good story good job.
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COOL! 🙂
I really want to read on. Well done! It really grabs the readers attention with your fabulous vocabulary. Keep up the good work.
WOW!!! That was brilliant. Some great description. Keep up the good work.
Thanks
That’s really nice work Bilal. But you have made a few silly mistakes. 🙂
That’s a really good peice of work Bilal.
WOW! There is some really good description in that piece of writing. Keep up the good work.
I think that will make me have nightmares.
WOW, I want to know what happens next.
Wow Bilal! You did a really good job! I really want to here what happens next in your story!
bilal This is a great story.
this story is scarys and really good story good job.