You did a nice job of writing by adding some great adjectives to better describe your story, making it fun to read. I think the next thing that happens is that you don’t catch the apple, and the alien pet runs after and fetches it, and brings it back to you so you can throw it for him again because he loves to play. Keep up the good work on the 100WC.
Hi there
I really enjoyed reading your story – particularly how you’ve imagined Neil Armstrong going back in time and arriving on the moon as a boy. Good work – keep on writing!
Helen (Team 100WC)
You did a nice job of writing by adding some great adjectives to better describe your story, making it fun to read. I think the next thing that happens is that you don’t catch the apple, and the alien pet runs after and fetches it, and brings it back to you so you can throw it for him again because he loves to play. Keep up the good work on the 100WC.
That is so…… COOL!!!
I really like that.
There is nothing surprising about that because you always write good stories!! ;D
Hi there
I really enjoyed reading your story – particularly how you’ve imagined Neil Armstrong going back in time and arriving on the moon as a boy. Good work – keep on writing!
Helen (Team 100WC)
WOW! That is awesome. I love it so much. Great job
WOW. That is so good, great job.
Welldone! Your writing was great! 🙂 🙂
Thank you!