Balram The unexpected travel

Posted on April 20, 2013 by bsahota21
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7 Responses to Balram The unexpected travel

  1. hdawood21 says:
    April 21, 2013 at 6:44 pm

    Nice story. You used alot of describing words in just 100 words.

  2. mshort33 says:
    April 24, 2013 at 12:43 pm

    WOW! Thats really good Balram I really liked the way you used all your describing words.

  3. bali44 says:
    April 24, 2013 at 12:44 pm

    COOL! I really enjoyed reading your story. I wonder what happenes next. Next time don’t use suddenly so many times.

  4. apatel339 says:
    April 24, 2013 at 12:48 pm

    Hi Balram,
    I really like the part where you described Joey.
    Well done.

  5. smussa29 says:
    May 8, 2013 at 1:32 pm

    That was a really good story Balram. Next time try to think of another word rather than suddenly.

  6. mumar25 says:
    June 8, 2013 at 7:43 am

    Fantastic Balram! I like the describing words in this story. Well done!

  7. myazdani20 says:
    June 8, 2013 at 5:20 pm

    Great story Balram, I wonder what happens next?

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