Randeep and the missing piece

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4 Responses to Randeep and the missing piece

  1. hdawood21 says:

    I really like the way that you said he was unconsious and then he woke up and saw the moon. Well Done!

  2. nasghar22 says:

    Randeep you should have put a few pictures on it.
    But apart from that I really liked your story! I agree with Humayrah about the part when he was unconsious – that was a really good idea!:D

  3. nasghar22 says:

    Humayrah – I’m sorry if wrote your name wrong:)

  4. siraaj says:

    Well done Randeep. 🙂 That is a brilliant piece of writing. 🙂

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