Hello Abdulhaadi,
Well done on entering the 100wc. I loved the photo prompt this week.
I love it! The first child in space, feeding an alien a mars bar and the play with the Monsters Inc BOO! That really made me laugh.
Your writing is clear, and you used some good alternative words for said. Be careful to use the comma at the end of each piece of speech.
Well done again
Keep entering the 100wc
Mrs W – Team 100wc
Flamborough, East Yorkshire, England
My class blog on http://kittiwakesclass2012.primaryblogger.co.uk if you would like to have a look where we are.
I really like your pictures and your presentation.
Hello Abdulhaadi,
Well done on entering the 100wc. I loved the photo prompt this week.
I love it! The first child in space, feeding an alien a mars bar and the play with the Monsters Inc BOO! That really made me laugh.
Your writing is clear, and you used some good alternative words for said. Be careful to use the comma at the end of each piece of speech.
Well done again
Keep entering the 100wc
Mrs W – Team 100wc
Flamborough, East Yorkshire, England
My class blog on http://kittiwakesclass2012.primaryblogger.co.uk if you would like to have a look where we are.
I really like the pictures and your presentation, but why did you do Mars?
Lovely piece of writing, Abdulhadi.