great story but watch out for the capital letters. 🙂
Wow! Your descriptions are great, especially the description about how you felt!
Saimah were was ‘but all i could see was water.’ But apart from that it was fantastic! 🙂
Correction: “Saimah, where was ‘but all I could see was water.’?
It is very interesting Saimah!
I konow Intisar after I had written the story i realised I had forgotten the prompt!
Your story was epic!: ) But you didn’t include the prompt.
That is amazing story Saimah, but next time remember to put the prompt in.
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great story but watch out for the capital letters.
🙂
Wow! Your descriptions are great, especially the description about how you felt!
Saimah were was ‘but all i could see was water.’ But apart from that it was fantastic! 🙂
Correction: “Saimah, where was ‘but all I could see was water.’?
It is very interesting Saimah!
I konow Intisar after I had written the story i realised I had forgotten the prompt!
Your story was epic!: ) But you didn’t include the prompt.
That is amazing story Saimah, but next time remember to put the prompt in.